Black*Star

[BLACK*STAR!]

MEISTER




IT SEEMS TO ESCAPE ME

Name:
Black*Star
Alias:
Star
Gender:
Male
Age:
15
Meister Level:
Spartoi Member:Two-Star


AS SEEN THROUGH THE SOUL

Personality Traits:
List at least 5 negative and 5 positive traits about your character.
[+] One of the most athletic students at DWMA
[+] Skilled combatant even without a weapon,
[+] Has the power to utilize a technique called "Black☆Star Big Wave"
[+] Sole survivor of the Star Clan
[+] He gets along very well with Soul.

[-] Arrogant
[-] Loud-mouthed
[-] Always makes a big entrance
[-] Tries to upstage everyone
[-] Frequently calls himself a "big" man destined to surpass God



Likes & Dislikes:
5 of each, please
[✔]Being Loud
[✔]Always winning
[✔]Shouting "Yahoo"
[✔]Making his presence known
[✔]To beat down anyone more popular than him so he can be popular again.

[✘]Death The Kid
[✘]Having someone else get more attention than himself
[✘]Being called "Small"
[✘]Not being popular
[✘]Loses a battle


Notes:
Black*Star is always loud and sometimes annoying plus all the time before battle he always says "YAHOO!!!!!! I AM BLACK*STAR AND I WILL SURPASS THE GODS!!!!!!!!!!!!! plus his Theme Song is
Black Star Tribute - AMV
[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h-nXRBQrtuk
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THE SECRETS I LET OUT


Soul Resonance:

Resonance Name -
Description

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Description


Performance:
Strengths:
Strong
Determination
Fitness
Weaknesses:
Too loud
Determination
Intellect

THE PUPPETEER

Name:
Black*Star
Age:
16
RP Experience:
1
Password:
rainbow
RP Sample:
After arriving at Tsubaki's home in Japan, Tsubaki's father first sees Black Star and, despite his eccentricity, takes to the young Meister at once. Black Star takes it easy at first, but is soon back to training. He finds that his ability to use Soul Menace is slowly coming back. Tsubaki's father asks him why he wants to become strong. Black Star replies that he simply wants to stand out, and to achieve that, he will grow stronger. Tsubaki's father asks him if he is prepared to go down the 'Path of the Demon' to achieve his goal. Black Star angrily replies that he will seek power, even if it means going down the 'Path of the Demon.' However, he begins to have doubts about this when he finds Tsubaki worried about him.
One night, Black Star is outside looking up at the sky. He thinks of his heritage as the Star Clan. He is approached by Tsubaki, and the two talk. Black Star tells her that as a member of the Star Clan, he is always in darkness. However, he describes Tsubaki as the bright stars whilst he is the dark sky. Tsubaki teases him, saying that he is not like himself, and Black Star, embarrassed, tells her that he just wants to thank her. He then asks her if she can take him to the large deer in the Uncanny Sword. Tsubaki complies, and Black Star proceeds to meet with the spirit, intent on guiding Tsubaki.

Black Star meets with the spirit, determined to show him the power of his soul. The spirit instead, shows him what it means to follow the 'Path of the Demon,' by forcing Black Star to see the images of the regretful souls of those who had fallen by the Uncanny Sword, including Masamune. The spirit remarks that Black Star is trembling, and the Meister is in tears. However, he claims that these tears are not his own but of the ones who failed to master the ways of the warrior. He tells the spirit that he does not want to lose, and proceeds to say that he will take on the burden of the regret of the ones who had fallen. He tells the spirit that the path he walks is not the 'Path of the Demon' but the 'Path of the Warrior' who revives the dead. Convinced of his power, the spirit agrees to help him, saying that their souls will go alongside him.

Black Star is next observed having joined Spartoi.

[JAYDEN]

8C

This is a shame. Your app, mostly looks okay. I need you to do something. You kinda balls'd up. You need to quote the post with the application, to get the coding. All you got was the raw text. So yeah. You'll have to fix that.

" [+] One of the most athletic students at DWMA
[+] Skilled combatant even without a weapon,
[+] Has the power to utilize a technique called "Black☆Star Big Wave"
[+] Sole survivor of the Star Clan
[+] He gets along very well with Soul."

Most of these are not personality. The only one is. None of them. They all have to do with fitness, history or relation to a single person. It needs to be things like 'clever, intelligent, kind' etc.

Your negatives are fine though.

I need you to tell me a bit about Black*Star in notes. He's a canon. Tell me what happened, the most important parts of his time during the anime, and before the anime (i.e. meeting Tsubaki, Star Clan junk, etc.)


Strengths:
Strong
Determination
Fitness
Weaknesses:
Too loud
Determination
Intellect


Sorry what? This makes like. Hardly any sense. You can just type a paragraph describing how he fights (He often rushes into things, and is very loud. Doesn't make plans, etc. But very skilled in fighting, etc.)

And your RP sample is not what we want. We want something where it is. 1. Past Tense. 2. Not already have happened.

It doesn't really make much sense. You aren't really doing it correctly. If you could observe... say this thread: soulresonancerp.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=classrooms&action=display&thread=831&page=1 That would show you how we expect you to RP.

Also, 1 what exactly? Month, week, day, year?