Kim Chu

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[atrb=cellpadding,10,true][atrb=border,0,true][atrb=style,width: 450px; background-color: #303030; -moz-border-radius: 1em 1em 1em 1em,bTable] Meister IT SEEMS TO ESCAPE ME Name: Chu, Kim Alias: KC Gender: Female Age: 15 Meister Level: One-Star AS SEEN THROUGH THE SOUL Appearance: Kim, Chu is average height of 5'3, has a slim body type, weight of 117lb. A bit of a tan skin tone, violet-red eyes color with thinned eye brows. Long length-ed black hair (until she cuts her hair where its shoulder length), has six ear piercing in one ear and piercings going all the way around the whole entire ear in the other.Her casual clothing is usually a short sleeve black and blue plaid hoodie with Faded black jean shorts with a pair of black and blue high top converse, a black spiked collar which is strapped tightly around her neck, black fingerless gloves with small metal orbs on the knuckles... Personality: Kim is a shy and quiet type of person yet she’s a tomboy. And she is a rather curious young lady who is always delighted to learn more about anything in general. She is rather a book worm, and although she’s quite comfortable around certain people, nervous around superiors or big crowds. This discomfort can often be displayed as panic attack. However, if she meets someone new who she can connect with, she'd be able to open up to them, Also become more out-going, the better she gets to know you. In other words she opens up and shows her blooming sunny disposition. She is easy to talk to and a great listener. She is fiercely loyal to her friends, family and meister. As such will go to great lengths to appease and protect the one's she cares for deeply. Also, she is very comfortable around them, and the panic attacks are non-existent when in their presence. Her quiet demeanor and her thirst for knowledge make her a very respectful and diligent pupil. When studying, or learning she can be very serious and prickly. Often considered a teacher's pet to most, she only wants to learn so she can do better in protect her family and friends. Kim enjoys Sparing with those who seems like a good challenge, painting to help calm here nerve's when she is depressed, mad, or just in the mood, Sketching which in a way helps her focus more, Reading and laying about. She takes all of these things seriously and they help to calm her down when unease. She is also a lazy person when bored. History: Kim cant remember much of her past except minor details, grew up with her uncle in a dojo, training her whole life. His Uncle trained her at a young age. Kim's uncle even owned his own school were Kim could train at with the others. She was the youngest and the least skilled at the time. However, at her young age, she knew how to fight slightly than most kids in the dojo, and twice her age. A year after Kim started training as an apprentice her uncle disappeared. This is when she began to hear stories of her uncle, and his past. Kim's uncle was a deadly man who killed over a thousand innocent humans in battle. He knew that she would look down on him for killing all those people, this made her want to become stronger. She was taken in by one of the keepers of the dojo, which happened to be her uncles friends. The two friends did not always get along, because Kim's uncle was always training/working. She wanted to become better than her uncle, and the men in the dojo took her in, to help Kim achieve her goal, by training her/ teaching her what they know. she trained nonstop, fighting hard. Kim was not a strong person at the time, because her lack of muscles. This gave her the upper hand when it came to speed though. One day they're were some young man meet by Kim, and she did not allow them to pass. she offered them a challenge for her opportunity to test her strength, and if they were to beat her, they could pass. She asked that only one of them attacked her. They did so, and he looked like a normal human, so the person did not think about her being at all strong. Kim was attacked head on as they had an all out sparing match toward the middle or the match Kim realized claws were coming out of her body, when it was all over. She mumbled to herself as she left and said. "You pass" Heading back to the dojo, she lay ed in her room thinking about whats going on with her body and etc. Later that night she left a note saying shes leaving in search of answers. Kim wandered around the desert for days until she found a very large city that she soon found out its called death city. THE SECRETS I LET OUT Soul Resonance: All Meister's start out with one of two basic abilities. These include Soul Menace and Soul Perception. All beginning students must start at the lowest level possible. Fill out the next part after buying resonances for your team. Resonance Name - Description Resonance Name - Description Resonance Name - Description Performance: Strengths: - Control - Speed - Good Ranged Weapon Aim - Average Flexibility - Average Stamina - Focused - Fast Thinker -Good Team Work weaknesses: - Trusting - Low Pain Tolerance - Lazy - Very Bad Endurance - Bad Balance THE PUPPETEER Name: Kimberly Age: 15 RP Experience: 4 to 5 years Password: Rainbow RP Sample: I stared up at the sun slowly disappeared as it was beginning to set on this hot summers day, "could this really be the day I truly leave home? Could I ever return? Do I process skills? Am I strong enough to wield the power within?" She stands up from where she sat while she thought about those questions in her head as she picked up her bags off the ground, Feeling a bit more confident and ready to head for the academy. Although knowing her brother from the stories her mother told her about him, who would never approve of her being there in back in her home town, so avoiding him would not be an option. "Could she possibly try to follow in the path so many in her family have already chosen?" she asks herself like before still not answering her own questions. It would have been so much easier to stay with her mother where she was safe, cared for and loved, but in the end it would be no fun lying around, helping out in the cafe. What is there to do but take over working in a cafe? She wants to be more in life then work in a cafe, do more, and someday be well known by all. She wants to be looked up to by children and have the skills to protect the weak. "Well that’s it then..." She say to herself as she looks up at the beauty of the setting sun as she pushes some of her hair behind her ear. She would then sigh loudly before walking off into the sunset on her way to the road to a new life. Credit To: Death the Kid of SR

[SOUL!]

Well first off, you should go through everything one more time and read it out loud to yourself. I just noticed a couple grammar problems that can be easily fixed by doing that. Your history needs to be another paragraph or two also and your RP sample probably shouldn't be in first person. It doesn't make a good RP sample in this person. It should also probably be a little longer as well. Other than that, I like it! Just add a few more details and you should be well on your way!